Lips, a Tanka poem by Robert A. Sieczkiewicz

Lips with dew

 

I struggle with writing Tanka poems.  So much to say that must be reduced to 31 syllables.

 

1 thought on “Lips, a Tanka poem by Robert A. Sieczkiewicz

  1. June Pysto

    In Lips I would use another word than totally since that is over used in modern slang. I do like your poems though.

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